Peer feedback groups for Informational piece

If you are in a group of 4, comment to the next two people “down” from you. So Scott will comment to Emily and Olivia; Emily will comment to Olivia and Mike; Olivia will comment to Mike and Scott. At the bottom of the list, circle up to the top (like the ace in a game of cards :).

These drafts are due by the end of the day THURSDAY. If your draft is submitted late, points will be deducted from your final paper. If it is not submitted by noon on Sunday, I will not require your group members to give you feedback. 

Please offer feedback on how the piece begins and ends; on how informative it feels (and whether it feels like the primary goal is to inform rather than convince). An implicit argument is okay, but the goal should be to inform. Offer feedback on whether the article is clear and well-organized, and on major sentence-level issues.

Please be sure to share your draft with your groupmates AND with me!

Scott Downey

Emily Green

Olivia Luxon

Mike DiPalma

Joseph Smith

Zachary Lansing

Ariana (Ari) Tressel-Orner

Kalene Shafer

Elizabeth (Lizzie) Wenneman

Bryanna Martonis

Andrea (Andi) Matecki

Hannah Mulligan

Skylar Pratt

Sarah Sadler